WeTransfer Pitch Board and Feedback

The background IS white on the slides/files, just not Blogger for some reason

Feedback:

"Very ambitious. A lot of work in a flipbook, particularly with detail in costumes"

"looks very pretty

Flipbooks are a cool idea but lots of detail in it

It would appeal to students"

"Consider how realistic you want the style to be ---> needs to fit with the target audience"

"I think maybe company names, page numbers & company would make the boards look more professional"

"Is it like a flip book where its split into 3 so you can change the outfit? cos that is a cool idea"

"You can't show other peoples' work in final boards"

I agree with a lot of the feedback about how ambitious the project might be, at least on my part - simplifying it down to only line art might be a better option, and noted could always be added later, or separately. Our main aim is to show the different outfits/combinations that we might wear in the future, so we are definitely going with the flipbook idea, but simplifying it will probably be best for the time we have. 

Adding our names could be a good idea to make the boards more professional, so we will have a play around with that. Regarding the other peoples' work comment, a lot of others seemed to have research involving other artists's work as their research so that the viewer has an idea of what to expect, but since the gifs won't work anyway we'll change it.