Feedback:
- Subheadings might be nice
- Text too small on third board
- Add 'clothing' to first sentence
- Good amount of text
- Like the mock up, shows how it could be successful
- Like the board layout, simple and effective.
From my feedback, there aren't a lot of changes to make, mostly just on little parts of it. I think I included most information that I needed on them, and I think most of the layout is eay to read although I might add some more things onto board 2.
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